Wednesday, May 23, 2012

Creepy Crawlers Under the Bed


“You know Tasha, late at night monsters come out from under little girls beds and scare you,” my brother told me.
            “You’re lying, there’s no such things as monsters,” I replied.
            “Fine don’t believe me, but when you hear knocking, and taps late at night and big green scaly monsters stand over you, you will wish you never said that,” he retorted.
            Being six I was gullible and really did believe a monster lived under my bed and it’s three eyes, sharp teeth, foaming mouth, and scaly skin slept there. For the next week I had my mother check under my bed for a green monster.
            For as long as I could remember my brother and I always played tricks on each other, pretended to be knights fighting in battles, even having the adventures of captain underpants which we reenacted in the living room. Playing with Barbie and playing house were not something I spent much of with my time, I was more interested in the adventures my brother came up with. This time the adventure was more for him than me; the idea of monsters under my bed terrified me.
            “Is there a monster under there?” I would ask my mother. My heart would pound and I would feel uneasy until I saw her head again, her deep brown eyes reassuring me that everything was fine.
            “No monsters just dust,” she answered with a grin that lessoned the pace of my heart. But I was still skeptical.
            “Are you sure?” I’d ask.
            “Yes now go to sleep honey.”
            My sister became curious as usual always asking me why mom was always under the bed. I didn’t want her to know there were monsters under there because they might get her. The mind of a six year old is filled with pure imagination, now I understand why I fell for the trick in the first place. My brother was amused at the sight of my mother always checking under my bed and at first he laughed and I told him to go away because he knew that I believed his trick. However, after two weeks of no big, green, scaly monsters I told my mom I didn’t need her to continue to check for the monster.
            I began teasing my brother and would run around the house screaming there were no monsters under my bed. However today I still fear something could be under my bed or creepers in my closet. Even the tiniest noise makes my hair stand on end, you could say that I became afraid of the dark. I really never got over the fact that things are out there in the dark and I can’t stop them from coming. My brother didn’t help with his prank, after a few days of the teasing, I was so happy that on a nice evening I crawled into bed ready to get yet another peaceful night of sleep.
            The usual routine happened, my mom tucked my sister and I into bed, kissed us, and shut the light off leaving the light from the hall illuminating in. I fell asleep quickly, tired from the day of school and a day full of fun. I dreamed and laid in bed happy as could be, then I heard it. The door to my room crept open awakening me from my slumber, the light in the hall had gone out and the sound of the creaks my house made filled my ears, echoing through me. A feeling deep within myself knew something was wrong, I through my self back onto the bed and flung the blanket over my head. I curled into a ball breathing heavily, I knew now that there was something coming for me. The sensation of my heart pounding in my chest was so much I wanted to let out a scream. I could hear a tapping coming from under my bed and the sound of something moving out from under me. I grabbed the blanket and pulled it close to me and created a hole so I could see what was now standing over me. It was large and green his arms reached out to grab my arm. The pressure that had built up in my chest was let out with a scream so loud that the creature grabbing me ran out of my room. Tears streamed down my face as I cried for my mother. She ran into my room her arms wrapped around me and she whispered something into my ear and it calmed me down. My mom finally got me to go back to sleep but she never left my side.
            The following day I felt compelled to tell my brother all that had happened. But when I entered the kitchen he was standing there and as he saw me he blurted out an apology and stormed off to his room. That monster wont be under my bed again, anytime soon.

Monday, April 23, 2012

Narrative and Memoir

Narrative: This type of writing to me is taken from only one persons perspective about a particular experience. With the stories I read they were all taken from one person and how there day turned cruddy. Each one described what they experienced, their feelings, and reasons for the outcome of what happened.

Memoir: This is a story of one event in a set time. It's an event described by someone, tying into the narrative, that tells what happened, how it happened, and how they felt about it. The writer takes acutual events and retells it to the best of their ability.

Tuesday, April 17, 2012

The Truth Hurts


Jessica left the bathroom and headed towards the stairs to rejoin the ongoing party. The noise level grew as she reached the stairs, but the sound of familiar voices registered in her ears as she passed a bedroom. She walked towards the room they came from and almost opened the door, but she stopped herself.
            Mary, can I tell you something?” Louise, her best friend said.  Jessica was curious what her friend had to say; they never kept anything a secret. So she stayed.
            Of course, Mary replied, are you okay Louise?” she asked with concern.
            No, I’m not. I know something about Jonathan. I need to tell someone to you know, get some advice on what I should do.
            Jessica’s heart started to pound as her boyfriend’s name came up. She didn’t know what was coming but she had an idea. She got closer to the door, crouching in the shadows. Leaning into the door she strained her ears so she wouldn’t miss a word.
            What is it? You can tell me, I won’t say a word, I promise.”
            Last week Jonathan said he was sick and couldn’t go out with Jessica… Jessica had a flash back to the phone conversation, she was sitting on her bed all dressed for the night out, but Jonathan said he had a fever and didn’t want to get her sick. She turned her attention back to the conversation in the room,  “Well, Louise continued, “he lied to her.
            WHAT! Mary shrieked.
            Shh, we don’t want anyone to hear.
            Sorry, but what do you mean he lied? Mary asked but she already knew what was coming.
            Outside the door Jessica was trying not to break the door down. She felt betrayed by her best friend but also her boyfriend, who was waiting for her downstairs. She couldn’t believe that Louise was confiding in Mary. She thought Louise hated Mary.
            What I mean is I saw him making out with Kristin Black at the movies. Mary I don’t know what to do!
            Jessica leaned up against the wall, letting everything she just heard settle in. She couldn’t look at Louise or even talk to Jonathan. She sensed something was wrong with him but now she was too angry to even think of him.  Unfortunately, Jessica stayed in the hall to long and the door to the room and the one person she didn’t want to see was in, opened. Louise looked shocked, yet sorry, and Mary just stared at the floor too embarrassed to make eye contact.
            “Jessica…”
            “Stop! I don’t want to hear it! You lied to me!” Jessica said with a clenched jaw, “and you confided in Mary, of all people, God Louise!”
            “Jessica please-“ Louise pleaded.
            “No I can’t talk to you right now. I’m leaving,” she huffed.
            Jessica bolted down the stairs ignoring all the people that had gathered there except for her soon to be ex-boyfriend.
            She looked him in the eyes and said, “Were done,” then slid off the class ring he gave her and slapped it in his hand as she walked out the door into the cool night air.

Wednesday, March 21, 2012

Three Minute Stories

I read Ocean Child and I personally didn't like it. I had a hard time following her story and what she was saying. I feel as if she jumped around with the father and the child and at first i had no idea who she was.However she was descriptive and kept my attention throughout most of the story. Towards the end she did pull me back in with the ocean and the loss of her daughter.

Crane was a very descriptive and to be honest a little gross. The author really kept my attention by drawing a mental image for me. I found it interesting how she tied in the idea of her death as being a miracle. The author really put specific detail  into the dead women and I think that's what really kept me focused on the story. Towards the end though I feel like she lost her way a little and just tried to make it a three minute story instead of keeping her strong work going.

Snow Angel Boy was interesting and a bit funny. As I read i kept thinking that the wife was a little crazy, the husband was just barely capable of tolerating her antics with the snow village, and the son was a representation of the small snow angel boy. The author was descriptive enough to hold my attention but there could have still been more. I didn't like the end, i was expecting the husband to tear the doll up or do something dramatic but he didn't and I found it a little sad.

Friday, February 24, 2012

Showing not telling

The old man sits on his porch, pen in hand, and a pile of paper on his lap. The story of his glory days in the arena was finally going to be told.
I was in my twenties and going into my first gladiator fight i hadn't entered the arena yet but the sound of my heart pounded in rhythm echoed in my ears, and my lungs were pumping out more air than i could take in. I was a lonely soldier in an arena full of thousands. I step into the arena to find my opponent standing, waiting, and smiling a grin bigger than normal. We battle for what seemed like hours. Towards the end i had been thrown across the arena the sweat was dripping from my face, my vision obscured by exhaustion, and the vibration of every single muscle told me to stay on the ground, to end it now. I took a moment to look at the mysterious stranger, which the crowd kept calling him, he urged me on, to try to kill, to humiliate myself, but i couldn't let him take my pride. I don't remember what happened after that but i do know that I am alive now and still have my pride intact.

Wednesday, February 22, 2012

Welcome To My Blog

Hello!! Welcome to my awesome blog (not really)! I am a very quiet person who enjoys reading in my spare time and writing over school breaks. I am 17 and this is my first blog, and I hope you as my readers enjoy it.